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		<title>2 Secrets to Copy that Grabs Them by the</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[To move the needle on the &#8220;who gives a sh**&#8221; dial, you need to know what’s at stake.
The needle measures the emotional stakes raised by your messaging, as perceived by your audience.  If you don&#8217;t address, reference, or touch upon what&#8217;s at stake, little else matters.
Getting in shape or getting stronger may be a product benefit [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a rel="attachment wp-att-534" href="http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/2009/10/who-gives-a-shit-2-secrets-to-moving-the-needle/moving-the-needle/"><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-534" title="Moving the needle" src="http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/Moving-the-needle.png" alt="Moving the needle" width="182" height="202" /></a>To move the needle on the &#8220;who gives a sh**&#8221; dial, you need to know what’s at stake.</p>
<p><strong>The needle measures the emotional stakes raised by your messaging</strong>, <em>as perceived by your audience</em>.  If you don&#8217;t address, reference, or touch upon what&#8217;s at stake, little else matters.</p>
<p>Getting in shape or getting stronger may be a product benefit for an exercise program, but that’s not what’s at stake for the prospective customer.  In order to understand what’s at stake, <strong>you have to contextualize the desire for the product within the life of the prospect</strong>.</p>
<h3>What A Charles Atlas Ad Can Teach You About Moving the Needle</h3>
<p><a rel="attachment wp-att-443" href="http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/2009/10/who-gives-a-shit-2-secrets-to-moving-the-needle/atlas-mac-ad/"><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-443" title="Atlas-Mac-ad" src="http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/Atlas-Mac-ad.jpg" alt="Atlas-Mac-ad" width="219" height="293" /></a>A perfect example of contextualizing desire is the classic Charles Atlas ads created by <a href="http://www.bobwhelan.com/history/croman.htm">Charles P. Roman</a>.  Getting publicly humiliated in front of your girlfriend while she watches a bully kick sand in your face puts a completely different spin on &#8220;working out&#8221; than heart-health and longevity doesn&#8217;t it?</p>
<p>Now we know what’s at stake: the prospect’s manhood.  Hence the power of the famous headline: “<strong><em>The Insult that Made a Man Out of Mac”</em></strong></p>
<p>Do you see how much more emotionally galvanizing that headline is compared to a garden-variety pitch about the strength building benefits of &#8220;dynamic tension&#8221; workouts?</p>
<p>This old comic book ad is a wonderful example not only because of the searing mental imagery, but because it provides the first secret key:</p>
<p><strong>Key #1 &#8211; The stakes are always about the customer’s self-identity</strong>; will he maintain and grow his self-image/ego or will he suffer in the face of adverse reality?</p>
<p>And the second secret key follows on from the first one, because if what’s at stake is the customer’s self image, then:</p>
<p><strong>Key # 2 &#8211; The hero of the ad has to be the customer, not the product </strong></p>
<p><a rel="attachment wp-att-484" href="http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/2009/10/who-gives-a-shit-2-secrets-to-moving-the-needle/joe-2-2/"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-484" title="Joe-2" src="http://www.jeffsextonwrites.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/Joe-21.png" alt="Joe-2" width="126" height="211" /></a>If the customer is the most emotionally invested in the outcome and has the power to determine the outcome, who else could possibly be the hero?</p>
<p>Think about that Charles Atlas Ad again: who ended up kicking butt?  Mac &#8211; the thinly veiled stand-in for the reader &#8211; was the star of the ad; he was the one who transformed himself from a 97-pound weakling into a muscle-laden stud &#8211; the product just helped him get there.</p>
<p>Back when Charles P. Roman penned his first Atlas Ad, there were any number of muscle men selling courses by mail order, guys like <a href="http://www.sandowplus.co.uk/Competition/Bonomo/bonomo.htm">Joe Bonomo</a>.  If that name doesn&#8217;t ring any bells for you, and you can&#8217;t recall any of the others off the top of you head, it&#8217;s largely because the other guys either made <em>themselves</em> or their products the star of their ads.  The Atlas Ads made the customer the hero and they&#8217;re still selling courses to this day!</p>
<h3>Want to move the needle?</h3>
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<li><strong>S</strong><strong>peak to customer </strong><strong><a href="http://www.mondaymorningmemo.com/?ShowMe=ThisMemo&amp;MemoID=1719">emotions stemming from self-image</a></strong>.  Contextualize the desire in terms of common scenarios.  Understand what’s really at stake.
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<li>The feature might be an easy, learn-at-your-own-pace musical instrument course</li>
<li>The benefit might be mastering the piano in one&#8217;s spare time</li>
<li>The growth of self image might be the transformation from a musical embarrassment to an accomplished (and admired) musician</li>
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</li>
<li><strong>Provide a searing mental image of the customer kicking butt</strong> in the role they already desire to see themselves fulfilling. Make the customer the star, not the product.
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<li>&#8220;<a href="http://www.powerwriting.com/caples.html">They laughed when I sat down at the piano, but when I started to play! &#8211;</a>&#8220;</li>
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<p><em>Stay tuned for the follow-up post on how Temperament Affects Self-Image</em></p>
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